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Bryan Cranston and Alice Eve in Cold Comes the Night |
Their independent film has been picked up for domestic and international distribution this coming January by Sony Pictures, every young filmmaker's dream.
I wish them well. It's quite a coup to score Cranston, whose popularity alone will draw an audience, but I suspect those audiences will be left cold. While Cold Comes the Night is gorgeous to look at, the storytelling is a mess. I could stop there, except that I'm fascinated by the kind of mess it is, because it's something I see a lot of in independent film—great visuals, weak writing.
As filmmaking technology has gotten cheaper and the art form has democratized, we seem to have a generation of homage-makers who know what looks good and excel at replicating the visual style of the films they love but who are less skillful with plot, characterization or internal consistency. If I was feeling churlish, I'd say that they've seen too many good movies and read too few good books.
Example 1: In Cold Comes the Night (spoilers ahead!), Cranston plays Topo, an aging, half-blind Polish career criminal who has stopped for the night in upstate New York's crappiest motel, run by single mom, Chloe. Topo and a companion are traveling north to deliver a package to the shadowy underworld of Quebec (is there such a thing? yes, there is!). The companion does something bad and the small town police impound the Jeep in which the package is hidden.
Topo takes Chloe and her little girl hostage and forces them to take him to the impound lot. There's a great, tense scene where Topo sends Chloe into the lot to break into the Jeep. By now, Topo and other characters have established quite clearly that whatever this package is, it is hidden behind the car stereo in the Jeep's dashboard. Chloe breaks in, pulls off the stereo face, feels around in the small space behind it—but the package is gone. The entire action of the film is the pursuit of this package.
When we see this package later, it is a bag of money. A big bag. Like, airplane carry-on big. Bowling ball bag big. Gym bag big.
There is no physical reality in which this much money was ever stashed behind a car stereo.
An envelope of diamonds would've fit, or a thumb drive full of Vital Information—but not this bag. To me, that's beyond a continuity error, that's just careless disregard for storytelling. I suspect if Chun and his co-writers ever worried about this, they set aside such a minor detail for the sake of the smart visual which bookends the film: A bloody $100 bill, blown by the wind against a kitchen window, encapsulating the film's noir theme of criminality colliding with domesticity. And how much money is worth killing over? A big damn bag full.
Example 2: Topo is well established as a ruthless man, perfectly willing to shoot Chloe's little girl if it will get him what he wants. As he and Chloe pursue the Big Damn Bag of Money, there's a scene where they are confronted by two characters trying to stop them. Topo shoots one dead, with a single shot. (Isn't he half-blind? Nevermind, his evil is as accurate as ever!) Then, inexplicably, Topo merely subdues the far more dangerous of the two opposing characters and leaves him tied to a radiator.
Why, why, why? Because obviously this guy has to be the loose end, the wild card, who delivers the final, fatalistic shoot-out Chun wants for his film, whether or not this makes any sense within the context of the story Chun himself chose to tell. Naturally, this shootout is the source of the bloody $100 bill flapping ominously against the window of normal life.
But it all looks terrific.
Well, I don't mean single out Chun. Like I said, I see the triumph of style over storytelling in many a sincere, earnest, heartfelt independent film effort—and I wouldn't for a moment second guess that Cold Comes the Night is such an effort; that Chun, as he told us during the Q&A after the screening, really put his love of crime films into his movie. (Surely, one sees this sort of thing in mainstream movies, too, it just feels more disappointing in an independent film somehow, where there is supposedly a higher value placed on storytelling.)
Aspiring directors and screenwriters, do yourselves a favor: read J.R.R. Tolkien's essay "On Fairy-Stories." No matter what genre you're working in, you are engaged in the work he addresses, which is creating an imaginary Secondary World which, in order to be believable and transporting for the audience, has to be as internally consistent as our Primary World, or the deal is blown.
See the trailer for Cold Comes the Night here.